Feedback #3

One lesson I could improve for paper 4 is integrating my own ideas with other Ideas. I need to follow up quotes with analysis, explanation and connections to essential questions. Another lesson I need to improve is working on my sentence level control. I must watch out for a lot of stigmatizing errors. For me […]

Final Draft

Kuomar Fitzgerald   March 4th 2019   Eric Drown  ENG 123   Final  Jack MacFarland came into Rose’s life at the right time, especially with all the stuff that Rose was dealing with at the time. Rose liked how hard and how invested Jack was into his work. MacFarland was important to Rose’s success because he made Rose more invested into his school […]

Rose & Coates (Rough Draft)

Jack MacFarland came into Rose life at the right time. Especially with all the stuff that Rose was dealing with at the time. Rose liked how hard and how invested Jack was into his work. MacFarland was important to Rose success because he made Rose more invested into his school work and got him into […]

Average Q’s

What Mike Rose learns from his Voc. Ed. buddies is how to be mediocre. He explains how that he would just get by in class and only use half his brain. He learned these habits because he found it easy to relate to people who came from the same neighbor as him and had to […]