Rose & Coates (Rough Draft)

Jack MacFarland came into Rose life at the right time. Especially with all the stuff that Rose was dealing with at the time. Rose liked how hard and how invested Jack was into his work. MacFarland was important to Rose success because he made Rose more invested into his school work and got him into college. Coates did not learn much from the classroom as much as Rose did from the classroom. Most of the knowledge Coates received was from outside the classroom and in the books he read. If it wasn’t for MacFarland Rose would not have went to college because he had not even thought of the idea of higher education. Coates had similar figures in his life when he read books about powerful black figures in the black community. Malcom X was a huge role model to him in his life because he admired how real he was with society. Rose and Coates received different mentorship in life but ended up at the same end goal which was being successful. The mentorship that Rose received was mainly from his teacher MacFarland. Learning the ways to get your work done and enjoy the work you do. For Coates the mentorship that he received was from multiple people but mainly from the books he read and to be more specific from most of the books he read about Malcome X.  

Our social identities shape our personal identities, our minds, our relationships, our lives, our life paths, our prospects, our sense of America and the American Dream in many ways. The reason why these identities shape our lives is because society cannot function without categorizing everything. Therefore, the way you present yourself to the world decides your life path and etc. For example, when Rose was going to school, he uses to goof around and not take school serious, never thinking about a higher education once he graduated from high school. Until one day he decided to change his life around and take school serious by taking pride in the work he did. The day Rose decided to step it up in the classroom and change the way he was perceived as a person to society was a turning point that lead Rose to a successful life. 

When Coates explains the fear of his life at the 7-11 it was easy for me to understand. The boy in the ski jacket at the 7-11 wanted to state the power he had by pulling out the gun showing how easily he could of taken Coates life. The reason for that boy doing that is because he fears life to just as much as Coates does, but his way of expressing this and feeling secure was by pulling out that gun showing his power. Coates explains how he was so shocked from what happen that he didn’t tell anyone what happen and just try to process what happened to him all that day. The differences that Coates describes between the experiences of the little white boys and his owns is that they live in a different type of environment. Where in their world the only worry they have is not getting poison oak on them. For Coates he has two worry about the destruction of his body that other can inflict on him. When Coates says, “Comparing these dispatches with the facts of my country was a galaxy and this galaxy stretched from the pandemonium of west Baltimore to the happy hunting grounds of Mr. Belvedere. I was obsessed over the distance between that other sector of space and my own.”  Coates calls this the American Galaxy because how different his life is from other people around the country; preferably white people. Rose is a great example of this because he grew up in a similar environment as Coates but never faced the same problems as Coates. Rose even explains how, “There were gang members who sauntered up from Hoover Avenue, three blocks to the east and occasionally I would get shoved around, but they had little interest in me either as member or victim. I was a skinny, bespectacled kid and had neither the coloring nor the style of dress or carriage that mark me as a rival.”  


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